"even if I thought the goal of this...exercise was to lose control, not keep it."</> I think the second Alderaanian in the first sentence should be capitalized. There might be one more missing letter, but I didn't spot it on the last read-through.
Not that any of that kept me from enjoying this any less. I could hear them talking while reading it.
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Date: 2010-06-22 07:13 pm (UTC)Not that any of that kept me from enjoying this any less. I could hear them talking while reading it.